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Wednesday, 7 March 2012

EXHIBIT A -Rough Cut Feedback





After watching our rough cut version of EXHIBIT A we realised one main problem which was it was way over three minutes. We have decided to cut it down also fine cut it because the opening of EXHIBIT A just dragged on and was getting quite tedious.


However, looking at the rough cut version we did find some shots that we really did like. The match cut shot of Baris heading towards the house which changes to him being watched from inside of  the house worked really well, it also created tense.

We also thought the flashbacks looked really well.  The first flashback of the man (Tufael) in the house and the other of the victim (Sabina) on the floor created tense also we get an insight of what happened during the course of the film.


        
After looking at the rough cut version we did
decide to take out the two shots with the clock as we thought it was unnecessary and adding extra time to the opening also it didn't fit with the whole scene and looked out of place. 

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