Exhibit A - Rough Cut

Whilst editing the opening we realised that it went over five minutes. We managed to get it down to three minutes however, we are still going to try to get it down even shorter and make some of the scenes faster. Although we felt we had some good shots, we realised even after we cut some shots down, it still worked well. Our pace was also too slow, it seemed to drag on a bit, so by cutting down shots this also helped keep up a fast pace building tension film!